DCFC1388 Posted January 28, 2023 Share Posted January 28, 2023 I feel like it should say 'had saved us' but would be decent to get this going too EranioIsGod, EtoileSportiveDeDerby, Dcfcsr92 and 8 others 7 1 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DCFC1388 Posted January 28, 2023 Author Share Posted January 28, 2023 1 hour ago, DCFC1388 said: I feel like it should say 'had saved us' but would be decent to get this going too Has saved us, not had* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CBRammette Posted January 28, 2023 Share Posted January 28, 2023 1 hour ago, DCFC1388 said: I feel like it should say 'had saved us' but would be decent to get this going too Like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scout's dad Posted January 28, 2023 Share Posted January 28, 2023 (edited) 49 minutes ago, DCFC1388 said: Has saved us, not had* Don’t think we even need ‘has’ just ‘saved us’ ? Edited January 28, 2023 by scout's dad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyMac5 Posted January 28, 2023 Share Posted January 28, 2023 13 minutes ago, scout's dad said: Don’t think we even need ‘has’ just ‘saved us’ ? You need the extra 'syllable'. I like the original, and it sounds grammatically correct, but I don't know. ? EranioIsGod 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevinhectoring Posted January 28, 2023 Share Posted January 28, 2023 2 hours ago, DCFC1388 said: I feel like it should say 'had saved us' but would be decent to get this going too Very tidy little ditty. Just don’t want to hear it from the shouty club poet - every time I hear his dulcet tones I have an anxiety attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost of Clough Posted January 28, 2023 Share Posted January 28, 2023 7 hours ago, DCFC1388 said: I feel like it should say 'had saved us' but would be decent to get this going too I disagree with "coming". It should be "going". RoyMac5 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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