1884 poem/song lyrics

[BatRam]

I’ve posted on here before about being in a rock band and I thought it would be cool to set myself a writing exercise to write a song/poem about derby county. I’m not a fan of naming players , mentioning penis’s or swearing in my tunes 🤣 so Iv not nicked anything from our actual songs. 
iv tried to make it so upon hearing/reading it you won’t necessarily  know it’s about derby unless the title gave it away. more about the fans in their thousands living and breathing derby county football club. The bottom bit will probably be worked into a chorus as it’s repetitive and easy to sing 😂
 By all means critique it , decipher it I don’t mind 🤣

Edited April 14 by BatRam

[Mucker1884]

Line 8 needs a re-jig.  Doesn't scan right.

 

And could you please add "Ha Ha" to the end of line 9, for us old 'uns!  😁

[BatRam]

9 hours ago, Mucker1884 said:

Line 8 needs a re-jig.  Doesn't scan right.

 

And could you please add "Ha Ha" to the end of line 9, for us old 'uns!  😁

Hearts and will remain ? Meaning heart and will power 😂

[Ramant62]

Line 8...  in our hearts it will remain

Last line.....Its now our day

[Mucker1884]

31 minutes ago, BatRam said:

Hearts and will remain ? Meaning heart and will power 😂

 Aha!  I'm with yer! 

I totally missed that!  NOW it scans! 👀  

... Beautifully!   😁👍🍻

[NickPFC]

On 14/04/2024 at 14:06, BatRam said:

My Pompey version. Sent to local paper...still online. 

See below.

Edited April 15 by NickPFC
Remove some unneeded text

[NickPFC]

50 Years of Feeling Blue.

 

50 years, can that be right?

Since ‘69 under bright floodlights

Fratton Park on a Friday night,

Five decades of blue and white.

Clear still the details of that first game,

The sights and sounds, the players’ names,

Milkins, Harris, Ley and Pack,

Hiron, McCann in the attack.

We ran on the pitch to TV’s ‘Power Game’ theme,

The first live match I’d ever seen,

We lost 2-1, as we left my brother,

Thought I wouldn’t want to see another.

But something about the Milton End,

Made me feel as if I’d found new friends,

A voice it spoke from deep inside,

This club’s for me. Heaven’s Light my Guide.

The 70s well, they weren’t so great,

Performances that were hard to take,

Relegation hurt, mixed with relief,

Perhaps a merciful release.

Regroup, rebuild and start again,

Unaware about the coming pain,

SOS Pompey, donating all loose change,

Thrown on the pitch to save Pompey’s name,

Against all odds we just survived,

In division four, our trade we plied,

Slowly, surely we made our way,

Back to where we are today.

In 2008 we won the cup,

Were relegated then came back up,

On one hand it seemed that business boomed.

On the other well, our club’s closure loomed ,

Football is a never ending story,

Triumph, disaster just transitory.

When asked why follow PFC I shrug,

And say it’s just the Pompey bug,

But what if I had missed that game,

Would my life have been the same?

With no oligarchs and no fake sheiks,

No terrible strikers and defensive mistakes.

No expensive ride up Harry’s garden path,

And dumped there broke, well you had to laugh,

They say that life’s a rollercoaster,

But is this the way that life’s supposed to,

Treat you as a loyal fan,

In coaches, cars and hired vans,

500 mile round journeys from your house,

Rollercoaster? Yeah, Southsea’s ‘Wild Mouse’.

Of course life wouldn’t have been the same,

Without Pompey, Fratton, and that Bury game,

The ups the downs, home and away,

They’ve made me what I am today.

Finger nails bitten down to the wrist,

Broke, depressed, a pessimist!

Yet I wouldn’t have it any other way,

So Play Up Pompey, Pompey Play,

Up forever and every day.

 

[YorkshireRam]

On 14/04/2024 at 14:06, BatRam said:

I’ve posted on here before about being in a rock band and I thought it would be cool to set myself a writing exercise to write a song/poem about derby county. I’m not a fan of naming players , mentioning penis’s or swearing in my tunes 🤣 so Iv not nicked anything from our actual songs. 

 

Crazy how I checked out after less than 2 sentences 😏😂

[BatRam]

3 hours ago, YorkshireRam said:

Crazy how I checked out after less than 2 sentences 😏😂

That what you look out for In the music you listen to ? 🤣😂